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Journey Bloomfield's avatar

Things Ava Writes Poems about:

*Stars

*Inanimite objects with personalities

*Peters

Ava ✨🪻's avatar

😂 you’re too right.

Ruth Anne Acheson's avatar

I really enjoyed this, Ava! You captured the bittersweetness of growing up and I loved that you wrote it from Peter's perspective.

Ava ✨🪻's avatar

aw, thanks so much!! I have a special place in my heart for Peter 🥰

Micah Kimber's avatar

a bit on the nose, but relatable.

Micah Kimber's avatar

yes, ma’am!

Hazlynn <3's avatar

Oh, poor Peter! This is so lovely and it radiates longing, thank you Ava <33333

Ava ✨🪻's avatar

This is what happens when we write poems while watching the Chronicles of Narnia XD thank you 🥰

Mary Kate's avatar

Wow. Ava, you perfectly captured the longing and loneliness in this piece. Amazing job!

Ava ✨🪻's avatar

thanks so much!! 🥰 I do feel for the poor boy 😭

🌸AlicetheDragonLover🌸's avatar

Oh my goodnesssssss! 😍😍😍😍😍 I love this!

Ava ✨🪻's avatar

thank you so so much!!!! 🥰

Sophhh🌻's avatar

oh my gosh Ava you nailed this 😭😭😭 you absolutely ATE with this one

Ava ✨🪻's avatar

alas for Peter 😭 thanks so much!!!!

Ava ✨🪻's avatar

alas for Peter 😭 thanks so much!!!!

✨ Mia Grace ✨'s avatar

I LOVE THIS

My favorite Pevensie lol

S. O. Sebastian's avatar

Ooh— ooh this was so wistful and lovely